Tourism is one of the most important things in Egypt
. It is one of the most important sources of national income. Tourists admire Egypt
. Egypt
has a lot of famous places. Tourists are visiting Cairo tower . They are visiting the pyramids
of Giza . They
are visiting
the library of Alex . They are visiting Egyptian
museum. They are visiting the temples
They are need a tour guide . The tour
guide is good for the tourism in Egypt . The tour guide must be
clever and careful.
good, but there are alot of mistakes. It is wrong to use the present continuous. In line 7, "They are need a tour guide". We should say" They need". There is lack of unity. Your paragraph is not coherent.
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